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crooked world by ~shannonsky:iconshannonsky:

Categories Photography > Abstract & Surreal > Abstract

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What made me want to take this picture was to have people see my point of view which is that the world is crooked.

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~xVampyrxPunkx Jul 4, 2009, 4:55:09 PM
This is a very good concept, and the explanation in the artist's comments makes a good statement, but personally I think this picture would look better in a higher contrast or black and white w/ a high contrast. Keep up the good work.
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~OmaraEnero Jul 4, 2009, 6:07:14 PM
I've taken pictures like these before... they usually come out good. But, I haven't uploaded them. I will soon.

Great work, anyways, =D
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*Zombienvy Jul 5, 2009, 11:41:55 AM
^.^ I'm glad you posted this. It is a great start to your wonderful point of view and I think I have a few ideas that you may or may not use to make this piece a little more polished.

the concept and composition of this is really nice. The focus is on the bolts not the background and its nice that the background does not distract from the subject. The neutral color scheme is nice and complimentary to your shot and idea as well.

To polish this piece you might try using a tripod or something steady to set your camera on as well as possibly playing with flash/no flash and your shutter speeds. The quicker the less time for the image to blur slightly. In my opinion is would just look better if everything was perfectly crisp and you could see the water droplets more clearly.

also, You might try finding some famous/old crazy quote to match your piece and put in the notes. IT makes it more relateable to more people AND deviants just eat up small collaboration things like that.

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*TwistedHearts Jul 6, 2009, 10:53:04 AM
The focus is great, and it's a very original picture! I also really like the angle you took it from. The -O is positioned so it's like you're looking through it to see the crooked/blurred world. I really like the idea, and you executed it well!
I just read what ~xVampyrxPunkx said about making it black and white, and I think it would look good in black and white as well!

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Mood: Affection ~shannonsky Jul 6, 2009, 3:55:47 PM
Wow thank you soo much!
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*TwistedHearts Jul 6, 2009, 4:15:46 PM
No problem! You're most certainly welcome :).
Thank you for the favourites and comments as well :heart:.

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